Revise the follow-up message below to be more professional and effective, based on the principles in this chapter.

May 2, 2014 Ms. Charlotte LeCliare Pebble Creek Publishing Inc.
New York, NY Dear Ms. LeClaire:
I wanted to thank you for taking time out of your busy schedule to show me around Pebble Creek Publishing. I really enjoyed it.
I’ve always wanted to join the publishing field, and Pebble Creek just seemed right to me. I loved watching how all of your employees work together to create the best possible product. They were quite a friendly bunch, especially the guys in the break room.
As you know, I have had extensive editing experience in my English courses that I took here at ISU. I also took a Grammatical Analysis class through the Linguistics program here, which was really helpful for me. I really love making sure things are right, and I would love to do that for your company.
I enjoyed my stay in New York very much. I am so looking forward to moving there very soon!
Thank you so, so much, Terese Mart (515) 888-1212 P.S. I did have a few expenses from my stay, so will I be reimbursed for those? That would be awesome.