7-34. MESSAGE STRATEGIES: WRITING POSITIVE MESSAGES [LO-4] Mountain Equipment Co-operative (MEC)

has become one of the greenest companies in Canada, adopting a variety of technologies and practices that have reduced its energy usage greatly.

7-35. MESSAGE STRATEGIES: REVISING A PROCEDURE [LO-4] Revise the poorly written procedure below. Use the guidelines given in the chapter to identify problems in planning, style, and design, and then reorganize and rewrite the procedures using effective document design.
Buy More Industries is an electronics retail operation with a full-time staff of 40 and a part-time staff of 80. The employees are between the ages of 18 and 40. Incorporate these procedures into an email message to all employees from the general manager.