6.23 Avoid Empty Phrases (LO6.1)

Revise each of the following items to eliminate empty phrases.

A. Needless to say, General Mills is by all accounts among the worst offenders of marketing less healthy cereals to children.

B. In my personal opinion, Kellogg’s children’s cereals are in a very real sense superior to General Mills in terms of nutritional value.

C. The point I am trying to make is that parents, for all intents and purposes, are usually unaware of how unhealthy most children’s cereals are.