We are sorry to report that we are unable to ship your complete order at this time.
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We are sorry to report that we are unable to ship your complete order at this time. However, we are able to send two corner workstations now; you should receive them within five days.
You can further soften the effect of bad news by placing it in an introductory subordinate clause that begins with although, since, or because. The emphasis in a sentence is on the independent clause. Instead of saying We cannot serve you on a credit basis, try Although we cannot serve you on a credit basis, we invite you to take advantage of our cash discounts and sale prices. Revise the following so that the bad news is de-emphasized in a dependent clause that precedes an independent clause.
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Essentials Of Business Communication
ISBN: 9781337386494
11th Edition
Authors: Mary Ellen Guffey, Dana Loewy