Completing: Revising for Readability [LO-2] Rewrite the following paragraph to vary the length of the sentences and
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Completing: Revising for Readability [LO-2] Rewrite the following paragraph to vary the length of the sentences and to shorten the paragraph so it looks more inviting to readers.
Despite the rapid increase in the number of low-cost carriers today, the aviation industry is reporting losses in this segment, reportedly due to reduced passenger load on short sectors. This is also coupled with the increase in low-cost tickets, which is almost the same as those of full-service carriers.
Passengers prefer full-service carriers, where passenger comfort benefits complement the overall flying experience, leaving a first-time customer with a pleasant experience of mid-air hospitality. Low-cost carriers like Fly-Right, East Air, and Indiana Airways have failed to report full-load capacity on short-haul sectors and are in a dilemma as to whether to discontinue services on these sectors or re-examine their business model and service offerings. It is apparent that the national aviation authorities must intervene to resolve this impasse and ensure that low-cost carriers such as the ones mentioned above are not threatened by the discounted promotional offerings of full-service carriers.
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Business Communication Essentials A Skills-Based Approach
ISBN: 0133896781
7th Edition
Authors: Courtland L. Bovee, John V. Thill