I had a meeting with you a fortnight ago for the position of product manager with your company. Thank you so much for your time. I once again apologize for reaching 15 minutes later than scheduled due to the traffic snarl at East Street, as I explained that day. I had tried contacting you on your direct number, but your phone was continuously busy. I left you a voice mail message too. However, you were kind and understanding, and few would have been as considerate in your position. So once again, thanks! As I mentioned to you, I am looking at other opportunities and have been interviewed by three other prospective employers since our interaction. However, there could be nothing better than working for a boss as calm and unassuming as you. I think I would be an ideal candidate for the position and would fit in well with your organization. I am on vacation till Friday, but you can reach me on my mobile phone (no.: 877-9098).

Read the following messages and then (1) analyze the strengths or weaknesses of each document and (2) revise each document so that it follows this chapter’s guidelines.