Message Strategies: Marketing and Sales Messages

[LO-4] Read the following message and

(a) analyze the strengths and weaknesses of each sentence and

(b) revise the document so that it follows this chapter’s guidelines.

Crankstein and Crick is the best name in real estate in the West Coast province. From residential apartments and condos to commercial space, we deliver a range of properties that suits every lifestyle and budget. We are the best in quality and design, and our motto is “Look no further.” Our latest offering is our child-centric homes, which have caught the attention of many newlywed couples. These homes are equipped with childfriendly amenities and the highest security standards. We would be happy if you visited our site office at 22 Norfox Street.