5. Revise the following descriptions of work history to reduce the number of words. Make sure you...
Question:
5. Revise the following descriptions of work history to reduce the number of words. Make sure you use parallel structure.
a. HVAC Technician: I installed air conditioning systems, including running the duct work and running and connecting electrical and gas supply lines. Assisted in construction of company storage facility. We were offered contracts to replace insulation on hurricane-damaged homes.
b. Recording Engineer: To edit and master recordings in CD-R media.
Work to design package and labeling CDs. Produce and sell CDs at public concerts. Operated PA and computerized lighting systems for Little Theater Productions.
c. Music Director: I directed choir during rehearsals and performances and selected music for weekly performances for the choir. Also, I ordered music from companies. When there was a special occasion, I put together a cantata of musical selections. The organ and piano—I played them, too, and sometimes handbells. Oh, and I sang for weddings.
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Technical Writing For Success
ISBN: 9781305948822
4th Edition
Authors: Darlene Smith Worthington, Sue Jefferson