Analyze the following letter promoting services of a senior day services. Pinpoint its strengths and weaknesses, and then revise the message if directed by your instructor.

The Senior Day Services Program at Forest View Hospital provides a safe place to leave elderly members of your family when you can't be home with them or just want to lead a normal life. Enclosed you will find a brochure that gives you more information. Call us at 662-555-2345 to make an appointment to visit our facility. Our counselors will tell you about the different activities they plan each month. We also offer counseling, physical therapy, and many other typical services. Just tell us what you think your family member will need, and we'll tell you what our policies are. We are located in the medical district of Harrisburg. Our hours are from 7 a.m. to 6 p.m., Monday through Friday. Other days and times are available by appointment for an additional fee. More information is posted at our website at http://seniorday.forestviewhospital.com.

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