APA style writing guidelines state that you should communicate your ideas as clearly and concisely as possible. To explore the application of this rule, share one paragraph of your Chapter $1$ draft $($it can be a paragraph that you are preparing for the assignment this week$).$ In your peer replies, provide edits and suggestions as to how the writer can enhance their clarity and precision.

The question is $($In your peer replies, provide edits and suggestions as to how the writer can enhance their clarity and precision.$)$