As per as Sec.GOV. "Our mission is to improve health with technologies that transform the way that antibody-based therapies are discovered. To achieve this mission, we aim to become the operating system for next generation antibody discovery and to act as an integral part of our partners' development efforts.".

This is Abcellera mission statement. I need their mission statement critique - Demonstrating a clear and in-depth understanding of the requirements of an effective Mission Statement. What are their positives and negatives with intext and references.