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ACTIVITY 2 This activity focuses on the application letter. Revise your letter in a correct business letter format, adding any letter parts that might be missing. Also, evaluate the letter for an overall professional tone, including spelling or grammatical errors. This letter is from you. Create a letterhead at the top of the document with your address. Review Composing Application Messages on pp. 252-259. Also, you can refer to the textbook appendix or Blackboard for application letter examples. Remember, this document needs to be more than one big paragraph You might need to add some details and you might need to take away some details from this document. It is not wise to keep every sentence of this letter as you see it. For example, almost every sentence begins with the pronoun I- that needs to be revised appropriately. You should focus on the person reading the letter. Your goal is to encourage the reader to invite you for an interview: therefore, you need to be persuasive throughout the message. Again review this chapter on tips to be persuasive with your application message The letter is from you to the Human Resources Manager (your instructor). Use the current year in the dateline. Submit the revised application letter on a new Word document. Do not retype your letter on this page. April 10 2016 Cook's Enterprise Birmingham, AL 35233 Dear Sirs I am very qualified for this position. I am constantly looking for an opportunity for advancement with a new employer. I would like to be considered as an applicant for the position. The primary advantage I would have as a manger is my heavy educational background Among the courses I have taken are April 10 2016 Cook's Enterprise Birmingham, AL 35233 Dear Sirs: I am very qualified for this position I am constantly looking for an opportunity for advancement with a new employer. I would like to be considered as an applicant for the position. The primary advantage I would have as a manger is my heavy educational background Among the courses I have taken are consumer behavior, retailing, marketing public relations, and advertizing. I am sure you do realize the many ways in which these courses can prepare one for a career in sales management. My background is in retail management and I fell well qualified for the Store Manager position in the Cook's West location you advertized on your website In addition to my classes, my educational background includes work in the university bookstore, service on the school yearbook and president of my fraternity. I will be recieving my degree on May 5, 2018. I will appreciate you studying the resume which you will find inclosed. If you can use an energetic young man with my educational background as I hope will you grant me an interview at your earliest convenience. So I can put my educational background to work for you I will followup this letter with a phone call so we can talk more about the position