Can someone help me make a short 2.5 - 3 min presentation with these 5 main points on polishing your messages by revising for conciseness - explaining with very good examples.

A. Polishing Your Messages by Revising for Conciseness. Use the fewest words possible to make your message easy to understand and to save the readers valuable time. 1. Cutting Flabby Expressions (ex. At a later date. Instead use later) 2. Ditching Long Lead-Ins (ex. This is to inform you....) 3. Rejecting Redundancies (ex. true facts, repeat again, PIN number) 4. Editing Empty Words (I work at a company that is successful. Instead write I work at a successful company) 5. Microblogging and Conciseness Microblogging consists of short messages exchanged on social media networks such as Twitter, Facebook, and Tumblr. When microblogging, include only main ideas, choose descriptive but short words, personalize your message, and be prepared to write several versions.

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