Chapter 4: Editing Test 4

Test 4 Editing Writing: Re-write this paragraph without fragments.

1 My older sister is delighted with her new job at the local pancake house. 2 The most popular restaurant in town. 3 Her boyfriend and a classmate also work there. 4Her required attire, a red shirt with embroidered large brown pancakes, is provided for free. 5One of the owners shows her the routine. 6Everyone are expected to learn all the different tasks. 7Making the customers feel welcome. 8Keeping all the tables spotless. 9Either the manager or an experienced worker tell her how to operate the register. 10. Everyone must work on weekends. 11Also at least two nights a week. 12 Saturdays are the best. 13 The most tips!