Each of the following sentences has a problem that makes it less clear, concise, or up$-$to$-$date than it could be$.$ Name the problem and revise the sentence. Your revision may use multiple sentences, and you may invent additional details if required.

When naming the problem, use the terms from the textbook and be specific. For example, say $$The sentence embeds a dependent clause$$ rather than $$The sentence is awkward.$$The safety team must collaborate together to discover new ways to make the warnings visible to the eye.