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Dear Mr. Weaver:

Yes we do offer personel record-keeping software specially designed for small businesses like your's. Here's answers to your three questions about this software,

1. Our WorkZone software provide standard employee forms so that you are always in compliance with current goverment regulations.

2. You recieve an interviewers guide for structured employee interviews and you also receive a scripted format for checking references by telephone.

3. Yes, you can up date your employees records easy without the need for additional software, hardware or training. As a matter of fact everything you need is immediately available.

Our WorkZone software was professionally designed to provide you with expert forms for interviewing, verifying references, recording attendance, evaluating performance and tracking the status of your employees. We even provide you with step by step instructions, and suggested procedures. You can treat your employees as if you had a Professional human resources specialist right on your staff.

Because important changes in laws and regulations are constantly being made every business needs to have details in one place. One major step toward compliance is having these details clearly accessible.

To try out WorkZone in your office for 30 days risk-free just make an appointment by clicking here. We look forward Ms. Weaver to demonstrating WorkZone to you personal in the comfort of your office.

Best wishes,

Marco Nava

marconava@abitechnolages Product Development 455-309-2091 www.abitechnologies.com

Amy Weaver Marco Nava &..a@abitechnologies.com>

Your September 20 Inquiry About WorkZone Software