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Request 1:

Subject: CS student request

Hi Dr Princevac, I am a fifth year student in CS and I am about to finish my studies. This is my 5th year, and I am expecting to finish my last three courses next quarter. My GPA is 2.9 but this is partly because the first two years I did not concentrate so much on my studies, as I was finding the early courses not really related to CS. I have done much better in the last years though. My student advisor last week told me that I need to take CS 000, which was news to me. No one advised me that I needed to. Is it possible to waive it? I have heard that you can do this. It would really help me as then I can graduate next quarter and not have to pay fees for just one class. Thank you in advance, Mitch