Francois and Darryl work for a product design firm in Montreal. This morning, Francois received a call from a client asking if he and Darryl could fly to Edmonton to consult on a new project. Francois and Darryl agreed, checked their calendars, and chose a 2 pm flight from Trudeau Airport the next day. However, when Francois called Air Canada to book two seats for the flight, he learned that no seats were available. He did a little research and decided he would prefer to take a charter flight leaving from Saint-Hubert airport, switching planes in Winnipeg.

Look at the email from Francois to Darryl (below)

Your task is to revise this email to:

a) Use a direct organization;

b) Arrange the material into effective paragraphs

c) Ensure all information is complete and clear;

d) Improve the subject line

Darryl,

I just got off the phone with Air Canada. There are no seats available on the 2 p.m. Bight from Trudeau that we planned to take tomorrow. If we have to take a later fight, I'd like to attend my staff meeting at 3p.m. I checked on the late flights out of Trudeau. They are at 7 p.m. and at 9:30 a.m. and are very expensive. Also I remember that the last time we flew out of Trudeau in the late afternoon, the traffic was awful. i also checked charter flights from Saint-Hubert and we can take a hopper from Montreal to Winnipeg and board a direct flight from Winnipeg with a 1.5 hour layover. This is a cheaper option but we arrive a bit later than we would like. Let me know what you think.

Franois

Franois Drapeau, P. Eng. Lead Design Engineer Fortune Designs Francois.Drapeau@fortunedesigns.com 514.555.2395