from the book business communication today 13th edition

Editing for clarity- rewrite these sentences to eliminate the indefinite starters:

6-59. there are several examples here to show that Elaine cant hold a position very long.

6-60. it would be greatly appreciated if every employee would make a generous contributed to Mildred Cooks retirement party.

6-61. it has been learned in Washington today from generally reliable resources that an important announcement will be made shortly by the White House.

6-62.there is a rule that states that we cannot work overtime without permission.

6-63. it would be great if you could work late for the next tree Saturdays.

Editing for clarity- rewrite these sentences to eliminate the indefinite starters:

6-59. there are several examples here to show that Elaine cant hold a position very long.

6-60. it would be greatly appreciated if every employee would make a generous contributed to Mildred Cooks retirement party.

6-61. it has been learned in Washington today from generally reliable resources that an important announcement will be made shortly by the White House.

6-62.there is a rule that states that we cannot work overtime without permission.

6-63. it would be great if you could work late for the next tree Saturdays.