Hello, I am writing my Professional Statement of Purpose. I worked for 10 years as a supervisor, lost my job then had to get an office clerk position... been working on my bacherlor, graduating on June 2022. Could you please provide feedback on my vision statement assigment below:

In recent years, we have witnessed an increase in fierce rivalry across a wide range of industries and businesses. The steady growth of technology has also played a significant role in the radical transformation of business patterns. Staying on top of the ever-changing industry trends is essential at this point. As a result, I intend to pursue a Master of Science in information technology with an emphasis in Enterprise Technology Management at Southern New Hampshire University to build a firm foothold in my chosen sector. Pursuing this MBA would enable me to develop advanced skill sets and global perspectives.

With more than ten years of professional experience, I believe that pursuing additional education will add value to my professional profile; this will eventually provide me with a competitive advantage over other professionals in the industry. Life, in and of itself, is a never-ending learning process, and I have never shied away from the opportunity to learn something new. During my professional career as a Senior Quality Systems Compliance Coordinator/Documentation Control Supervisor at BD Biosciences, Advanced Bioprocessing Facility in Miami, Florida, I was constantly presented with new opportunities. I worked here for eleven years, and my primary responsibilities were the implementation, management, and control of Quality System projects, customer complaints, and the management of materials.

As a result of this experience, I am currently working as an office clerk for the prestigious Termites Professionals, LLC company. I am given the opportunity to work in the Pest Control and Fumigation department as an acting office manager. I oversee sales, customer service, and office administration. It is clear from my past experiences that I have acquired the requisite skills to begin the process of obtaining a master's degree. Aside from that, I have performed admirably in the classroom, graduating with honors - summa cum laude- and I have a strong foundation in Lean Six Sigma Green Belt Certification, Project Management Certified Professional and Supply Management Certifications.

Southern New Hampshire University will award me a Bachelor of Science in Management of Information Technology when I finish my undergraduate studies. I had a strong desire to work in the Manufacturing-Pharma field. My teachers would frequently compliment my excitement for gaining hands-on experience in course areas rather than simply memorizing theoretical information. My college's well-regarded professors and its well-structured curriculum assisted me in developing a wide variety of technical and project management abilities. I used my newfound knowledge on several projects, including the final-year project, which was based on the Security Awareness Training Program for a fictitious company.

After gaining valuable professional experience and technical skills, I hope to understand the information technology management field through this course in information technology management. Upon completing this program, I intend to explore employment prospects in the manufacturing industry; this is an opportunity for me to put my knowledge and talents to use to make a significant difference in the lives of ordinary people. To summarize, I am looking forward to finishing my bachelor's degree and then beginning my Masters's degree at Southern New Hampshire University to continue refining my career path.