Hi, could I have help with an essay I have to write? I only have the thesis, but could you help me get an idea to start it? I have attached the assignment description via screenshot. I plan to the essay on "Donald Trump's Argument For America. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vST61W4bGm8

The thesis statement I have so far is: (This advertisement aims to gain votes and persuade Americans to support former President Trump, that he will help restore America's greatness. I believe that the advertisement has executed its purpose effectively.) Could you make the thesis statement better as well?

1,000-word essay in which you rhetorically analyze a commercial advertisement, political advertisement, or public service announcement in light of its context, the maker, the kinds of claims and appeals utilized, and the effectiveness of those claims and appeals. The video that you choose must be from 2016 or later to more effectively consider questions of (contemporary) context. In general, you will be analyzing the construction of the ad's argument. Your essay must take a stance on the effectiveness or ineffectiveness of the advertisement for its intended audience. This stance will form the backbone of your thesis statement, which will be fleshed out with specific mention of rhetorical strategies and their impact, as seen in the sample below