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Hi, I agree with you that education is essential in our kids' lives especially when they are developing their brains. Knowing what is good and bad for them is important, especially when discussing drugs and vaping, which can mess up their growing brain forever. Using nicotine in adolescence can harm the parts of the brain that control attention, learning, mood, and impulse control.2

Once a new memory is created or a new skill is learned, stronger connections - or synapses - are built between brain cells.

The bill I chose is related to providing mental health for children and adolescents as well, and one true thing is that there is an escalating awareness of the profound impact of mental health issues on a global scale, affecting a significant portion of individuals before the age of 14 and leaving lifelong repercussions for both individuals and society. Notably, mounting evidence attests to the positive influence of these interventions on the mental health of children and adolescents. These interventions have demonstrated effectiveness in reducing symptoms of mental disorders and promoting emotional well-being. This is why is significant the bill you have chosen.