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Abortions in North America

Introduction

Abortion is legal all through the United States and its domains, although limitations and openness shift from on state to another. Early termination is an exceptionally questionable and troublesome issue in the general public, culture, and legislative issues of the United States. Different abortion regulations have been in force in each state since somewhere around the 1900's. Starting around 1976, the Republican Party has commonly tried to limit early abortion in view of the phase of pregnancy or condemn fetus removal, while the Democratic Party has commonly shielded admittance to abortions and has made contraception simpler to get.

Topic Sentence 1:

1. Abortion is one of the most controversial issues having no grounds of agreement among two political aspects. The argument is life and murder.

2. Republicans parties are more likely to be pro-life while Democratic parties are more likely to be Pro-Choice. There must be a way to level out the difference between both parties.

3. While abortion has long separated political partisans, the partisan gap is now significantly broader than in was in the past.

Topic Sentence II:

1. American religious groups perceptions on abortion views differ widely. Jehovah's Witness is more likely to have abortion illegal while Unitarian Universalist are more likely to make it legal.

2. Unitarian Universalism is a liberal religion characterized by a free and responsible search for truth and meaning. This religion asserts no creed, but instead are unified by their shared search for spiritual growth, guided by a dynamic, living tradition. While Jehovah's Witness is a millenarian restorationist Christian denomination with nontrinitarian beliefs different from conventional Christianity.

3. While most females are religious in the United States there is still a significant amount of women who still have abortions, regardless of their belief. Activists should acknowledge the impact and pressure religion has on the experience of receiving an abortion for all women in the United States.

Topic Sentence III

1. Women's rights on abortion. Women in general should have the right to make informed decisions about their body and health care. They should be able to determine if they are able to carry children

2. Women should have access to safe abortion facilities with proper regulations and health services.

3. Women should also be practical about the timing of making this decision during conception and the first trimester.

Conclusion:

Abortion has gained so much attention from pollical views, religious views, and women's rights views. There needs to be a way to solve these issues. I realize that each case is different which is why health care practitioners, mental health counselors and regulations should be heavily involved with the pregnant women's decisions when it comes to terming a baby.

References

References

Carrie Blazina, M. L. (2021, June 17). Pew Research Center. Retrieved 04 04, 2022, from Key facts about the abortion debate in America: https://www.pewresearch.org/fact-tank/2021/06/17/key-facts-about-the-abortion-debate-in-america/

Masci, D. (Ed.). (2018, January 22). Pew Research Center. Retrieved 04 04, 2022, from https://www.pewresearch.org/fact-tank/2018/01/22/american-religious-groups-vary-widely-in-their-views-of-abortion/: https://www.pewresearch.org/fact-tank/2018/01/22/american-religious-groups-vary-widely-in-their-views-of-abortion/

Unknown. (2018, March 1). Pew Research Center. Retrieved 04 04, 2022, from The Generation Gap in American Politics: https://www.pewresearch.org/politics/2018/03/01/the-generation-gap-in-american-politics/