Professional communication mgmt assignment 5

3Ps Revising an Email to Employees >) PURPOSE Imagine that you work as the director of human resources for a division of a major bank and have asked an intern to draft an email to employees about a summer dress code. The email will be distributed to 300 employees in the divisional office. You will allow employees to dress more casually during the warm weather, but you also want to give them clear guidelines on what is and is not acceptable to wear in the office. You receive the draft from the intern, but it needs work. Email To: Corporate Staff From: Benjamin Porter Subject: Dress For this summer ONLY employees can wear more casual clothes. No more suits for us! Enjoy the warm weather but pls. don't embarrass yourself or the company, Thanks! Ben >) PROCESS 1. What do you want to accomplish with this email? 2. What, specifically, do employees need to know? 3. What works well in this email draft? 4. What could be improved in this message? >> PRODUCT Rewrite the draft email for employees