Question 1.

Your American boss wants to send a brief email message welcoming employees recently transferred to

your department from your Hong Kong branch. They all speak English, but your boss asks you to review

her message for clarity. This is the message:

I wanted to welcome you ASAP to our little family here in the states. It's high time we shook hands in

person and not just across the sea. I'm pleased as punch about getting to know you all, and I for one will

do my level best to sell you on

America.

a) Do you think this message is audience centered? Why or why not ?

b) Identify 6 errors in this email message. Point them out and make a list.

c) Write the correct version of this email message.