Question

Your Turn:Applying Your Skills at Taco Bell:As an assistant in the communications division of Taco Bell,you have been asked to help Dustin, the newly hired culinary product manager,revise a memo he has written.Assume that CEO Brian Niccol has asked all managers for innovative ideas.Niccol is interested in current food trends and in creating exciting new menu items responding to those food trends.The CEO emphasized this when he said "If you let the brand grow old, you will die.That means you deliver experiences that really matter to the current generation."In his new position as culinary manager, Dustin wants very much to suggest new items for Taco Bell that are in keeping with management's push for innovation and that also reflect current food trends.

Dustin has prepared a rough draft of a memo summarizing his longer report, which he will present at a management meeting next week.Although exceptionally talented in cuisine, he realizes that his writing skills are not as well developed as his cooking skills.He comes to the corporate communication department and shows your boss the first draft of his memo. Your boss is a nice guy, and, as a favor, he revises the first two paragraphs, as shown in Figure 6.6 of the text.Note:Please see a copy of Figure 6.6 in the Required Learning Materials Above.

Your Task:The head of corporate communication has many important tasks to oversee.He hands Dustin's memo to you, his assistant, and tells you to finish cleaning it up.He adds, "His ideas are right on target, but the main points are totally lost in wordy sentences and solid paragraphs."Revise this and concentrate on conciseness, clarity, and readability. Do you think some bulleted lists would help this memo?Revise the remaining four paragraphs of the memo, using the techniques you learned in this chapter. copy of the complete memo, incorporating the edits shown, to submit to your boss (your instructor).

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