Relevant Concepts: Direct$-$order messages, direct instructional messages, true question form, sentence structure, hidden verbs, cluttering phrases, sentence errors

This email message is from a college student to a professor who is a career expert. The student is requesting information for creating a resume which may be scanned. The request lacks the polite language needed for this instructional request. The questions also need to ask more specific questions for information about resumes. In addition, a clear descriptive subject line is needed.