Revise and edit the following message so that it communicates more clearly and concisely to an American receiver with an average reading level: (5 Marks)

I recently was petitioned to consummate an assessment of my supervisor. He registered very prominently in several of the domains on the assessment. He competently imparts intent and instructions, gives acknowledgment for a pursuit commendably completed, and exemplifies enterprise in dilemma analysis. He is adaptable and has an immense sense of comicality.

The only area I see opportunity for betterment is his aptitude to empower the labor to others on the unit.