Revising Closing Paragraphs Revise these closing paragraphs so that they are worded with a positive tone using the "you" attitude. There is no need to keep the original wording - in other words, please feel free to rewrite for conciseness, as well as tone and "you" attitude. 1. I need your response sometime soon so I can order the parts in time for your service appointment. Otherwise your air-conditioning system may not be in tip-top condition for the start of the summer season. 2. Thank you in advance for sending me as much information as you can about your products. I look forward to receiving your package in the very near future. 3. To schedule an appointment with one of our knowledgeable mortgage specialists in your area, you can always call our hotline at 800-555-9765. This is also the number to call if you have more questions about mortgage rates, closing procedures, or any other aspect of the mortgage process, Remember, we're here to make the home-buying experience as painless as possible. Revising Closing Paragraphs Revise these closing paragraphs so that they are worded with a positive tone using the "you" attitude. There is no need to keep the original wording - in other words, please feel free to rewrite for conciseness, as well as tone and "you" attitude. 1. I need your response sometime soon so I can order the parts in time for your service appointment. Otherwise your air-conditioning system may not be in tip-top condition for the start of the summer season. 2. Thank you in advance for sending me as much information as you can about your products. I look forward to receiving your package in the very near future. 3. To schedule an appointment with one of our knowledgeable mortgage specialists in your area, you can always call our hotline at 800-555-9765. This is also the number to call if you have more questions about mortgage rates, closing procedures, or any other aspect of the mortgage process, Remember, we're here to make the home-buying experience as painless as possible