The following sentences lack you attitude in business correspondence rewrite them to achieve the YOU ATTITUDE .

note ; in some cases you need to add information to revise the sentence effectively.

*please answer all of them, thanks in advance.

6-- The seminar given by our team will make you better and more professional managers than you are.*

7- You did not send us your check so we will not provide you with the furniture. *

8- We are pleased to inform you that our company installed a new ATM near your office. *

9- The credit card you supplied is expired and this is completely unacceptable behavior from your part. *

10- I will be out of the country from November 25 till December 5 and will not take any meetings or calls with anybody during that period. *