this is a accounting transaction for a small coffee shop but I'm came up with starting with $50,000 Capital

is this correct ?

the way i recorded all the transactions

if not where did i go wrong

Date 2020 Account DR CR Oct. 1 Bank Rent Bank 50,000 11 500 1,500 166.40 66.40 Insurance Bank Oct. 23.000 13,000 Laventury Bank Marketing Bank 1,000 11,000 Det 120,000 Equipment Bank 20,000 Furniture 15.000 5.000 Oet 8 Weekly sales Bank 14.500 14.500 Oct 15 4,000 4,000 Oct 22 Weekly sales Bank Weekly sales Bank Weekly sales 4,200 Oct 29 65,100 5,100 Bank 7 OLI Electricity LIVES 19735 Wwice bil 125 210330 Wage Bank 10,130