This is a discussion assignment for my business communication class. I have to develop a persuasive argument to present to my supervisor to convince him or her that you deserve a raise. I would like to change the profession to accounting specialist from sales person ( these achievements are all as sales executive). Please help me to change the content and 4 achievement accordingly as if I am an accounting specialist for BB firm. Please help me to change the content as much as possible. (tone should be appropriate as formal persuasive message) Thank you!!!

I appreciate the continued opportunities I receive as a sales executive for BB Company. In the course of recent years, I've grown significantly as a professional, extended my comprehension of the business, improved my range of abilities and taken on numerous new duties. Hence, I would like to request a raise.

My salary has been the same since January 2017. From that point forward, I have achieved the following:

• I've consistently met my monthly quota, and exceeded my goals for the past three quarters.
• My sales have increased by nearly 20% year over year, adding $400,000 in revenue.
• I've completed all senior sales certifications, including those not required for my job level.
• I've successfully trained and mentored six new junior sales representatives.

I would like to request a base compensation amount of 5%. On the off chance that conceivable, I might want to meet to talk about my solicitation face to face. I am glad to work with you to oblige this solicitation and am available to arrangement. If it's not too much trouble, let me realize when might be ideal to talk through further.