Your Task. Revise the following wordy opening so that it is more direct and concise. Write an appropriate subject line and opening sentence. 1. My name is Daryl Davidson, and I am assistant to the director of Human Resources at MicroSinergie. Our company has a Yammer-based enterprise social platform, which we would like to use more efficiently to elicit feedback on employee issues and concerns. I understand you have a software product called Opinionware that might do this, and I need to ask you some questions about it