The following extract and associated references are taken from the first draft of a critical literature review. The research project was concerned with the impact of direct insurers on the traditional motor insurer.

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Jackson (1995) suggests that businesses must be developed from a customer rather than a product perspective. Lindesfarne (1994) demonstrates that direct selling gives the consumer increased control as it is up to them when and if they wish to respond to adverts or direct mail. MacKenzie (1995) comments that free gifts are useful for getting responses to adverts, which is ultimately what all direct insurers need. Bowen (1995) suggests that this type of company can be split into three equally important parts: marketing, insurance and information technology. Motor insurance is particularly price sensitive because of its compulsory nature and its perception by many to have no real ‘value’ to themselves.
Bowen, I. (1994) ‘Short cut to success’, Post Magazine 2, 26 July.
Jackson, D.R. (1995) ‘Prudential’s prudent parochialism’, Direct Marketing , 26–29 April.
Lindisfarne, I. (1995) ‘Death of a salesman’, Post Magazine 15, 30–31 June.
MacKenzie, G. (1995) ‘Rise of the freebie’, Post Magazine 2, 5–6 February.