There are numerous problems with the content and structure of this extract. Some of the more obvious include:

• The content consists of predominantly trade magazines, in particular Post Magazine , and there are no references of academic substance. Some of the references to individual authors have discrepancies: for example, was the article by Lindisfarne (or is it Lindesfarne?) published in 1994 or 1995?

• The items referenced are from 1994 and 1995. It is certain that more recent items are available.

• There is no real structure or argument in the extract. The extract is a list of what people have written, with no attempt to critically evaluate or juxtapose the ideas.