Revise each of these sentences to improve you-attitude and positive emphasis. You may need to add information.\

6. I am looking for a position that gives me a chance to advance quickly.
7. Although short on experience, I am long on effort and enthusiasm.

8. I have been with the company from its beginning to its present unfortunate state of bankruptcy.
9. I wish to apply for a job at Austin Electronics. I will graduate from Florida State in May. I offer you a degree in electrical engineering and part-time work at Best Buy.
10. I was so excited to see your opening. This job is perfect for me.
11. You will find me a dedicated worker, because I really need a job.