One effective way to improve your writing skills is to critique and edit the rsum of someone

One effective way to improve your writing skills is to critique and edit the résumé of someone else.

Your Task. 

Analyze Elliana’s poorly written résumé. List at least eight weaknesses. Your instructor may ask you to revise sections of this résumé before showing you an improved version.

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Rsum Annalise Ortez-Villa 1340 East Phillips Ave., Apt. D Littleton, CO 80126 Phone 455-5182 E-Mail: Hotchilibabe@gmail.com| LinkedIn OBJECTIVE I'm dying to become an accounting associate in the "real world" with a big profitable company that will help me get the experience I need to become a CPA. SKILLS Microsoft Word, MS Outlook, MS Office, Powerpoint, Excel, spreadsheets Excel; experienced with QuickBooks, great com- posure in stressful situations; 3 years as leader and supervisor and 4 years in customer service EDUCATION Arapahoe Community College, Littleton, Colorado. AA degree Fall 2019 Now I am pursuing a BA in Accounting at CSU-Pueblo, majoring in Accounting; my minor is Finance. Completed 64 units of upper-division units. My expected degree date is June 2022; I recieved a Certificate of Completion in Entry Level Accounting in December 2019. GPA: 3.5 I graduated East High School, Denver, CO in 2015. Highlights: Named Line Manger of the Month at Target, 10/2018 and 03/2018 Obtained a Certificate in Entry Level Accounting, June 2019 Chair of Accounting Society, Spring and fall 2021 Dean's Honor List, Fall 2021 . Financial advisor training completed through Primerica (May 2020) Webmaster for M.E.Ch.A, Spring 2021 Chair, American Accounting Association (AAA), Spring & Fall 2020