4. Revise the following sentences to omit clichs and unnecessary prepositional phrases. a. As per your request,

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4. Revise the following sentences to omit clichés and unnecessary prepositional phrases.

a. As per your request, I am sending through FedEx ground the multi directional HDTV antenna you ordered.

b. The combinations of fragrance seem to sell well in areas of large metropolitan population in the United States.

c. The toner cartridge for the printer needs to be replaced with care.

d. With precision and swiftness, the photographer loaded the film into the camera.

e. I will be most grateful if you can afford me an opportunity to interview for the vacant position in your accounting area.

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Technical Writing For Success

ISBN: 9781305948822

4th Edition

Authors: Darlene Smith Worthington, Sue Jefferson

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