5. A small caribou made the town of Garnish his home. Part D: Edit for correct punctuation and capitalization. 1. Mr. Jonas was extremely upset with the mayor, staff and councillors. 2. The advantage of online retail, the president said is the reduction of storefront expenses. 3. The practice of shouting; typing messages in all caps offends many readers. 4. The decrease in water temperatures should decrease the risk of hurricanes, shouldn't it? 5. My brother likes to visit the Northern Peninsula in the fall because it is his favourite season. 5. A small caribou made the town of Garnish his home. Part D: Edit for correct punctuation and capitalization. 1. Mr. Jonas was extremely upset with the mayor, staff and councillors. 2. The advantage of online retail, the president said is the reduction of storefront expenses. 3. The practice of shouting; typing messages in all caps offends many readers. 4. The decrease in water temperatures should decrease the risk of hurricanes, shouldn't it? 5. My brother likes to visit the Northern Peninsula in the fall because it is his favourite season