5. As a five-star hotel, our guests' satisfaction is our top priority. 6. Upon reviewing the facts, the problem was a short in the wiring. 7. This streamlined process will save us so much money. 8. Depending on how you phrase your request will determine how the boss will respond. 9. In order to accommodate your request, please make your reservation by the end of October 10. On behalf of the management team, I appreciate your extra work on the project. 11. We need to know how many will attend, and please indicate their choice of entre. 12. As a member of the marketing staff, the best person to consult on this project is Allal. 13. As far as phone call monitoring, I believe we should try other methods first. 14. Through our research of three local charities we feel that each one would be a good one to sponsor 15. Each department will now have access to update your section of the website. 16. It is such a worthy cause, but I fear the organization's website will not attract many donors. 17. This is an important message, but by placing it in a long paragraph, it is unlikely that many people will read it. 18. As a 500X3) organization, donations are tax deductible 19. You can volunteer to help with publicity, set up, clean up or you can bring refreshments. 20. From the results of the survey, it is clear that viewers preferred the second design Wording Sentences Logically L010 Revise the following to eliminate illogical and awkward wording. 1. Because the Swift Company has a service-oriented culture is the reason it supports all forms of volunteerism. 2. Our staff is among the best as we strive for the highest level of customer service. 3. Thank you for your feedback that will help us continue to improve. 4. The meeting room you have reserved has a projector, Internet access, and will enable your attendees to hear the trainer easily. 5. As a five-star hotel, our guests' satisfaction is our top priority. 6. Upon reviewing the facts, the problem was a short in the wiring, 7. This streamlined process will save us so much money. 8. Depending on how you phrase your request will determine how the boss will respond. 9. In order to accommodate your request, please make your reservation by the end of October. 10. On behalf of the management team, I appreciate your extra work on the project. 11. We need to know how many will attend, and please indicate their choice of entre. 12. As a member of the marketing staff, the best person to consult on this project is Allal. 13. As far as phone-call monitoring, I believe we should try other methods first. 14. Through our research of three local charities we feel that each one would be a good one to sponsor. 15. Each department will now have access to update your section of the website, 16. It is such a worthy cause, but I fear the organization's website will not attract many donors. 17. This is an important message, but by placing it in a long paragraph, it is unlikely that many people will read it. 18. As a 501(c)(3) organization, donations are tax deductible. 19. You can volunteer to help with publicity, set up, clean up, or you can bring refreshments 20. From the results of the survey, it is clear that viewers preferred the second design
