conduct a peer review of this resume

• Your tone should be collegial and sensitive, but provide constructive, relevant feedback.
• Simply saying "nice job," "great resume," etc. is not a review and is not constructive.
• Explain both what is effective and why (i.e., including the positive), and what could be improved and why. Refer to the criteria you chose for your review.
• Consider what you hope to see as feedback on the review of your resume.

provide introduction, summery of review criteria, review of resume, suggestions, and conclusion.