Could the following text be rewritten in a better way? If so, rewrite it. "The author uses the example of China and India to illustrate the impact of globalization. These countries, with their large populations and rapid economic growth, have become significant players in the global economy. Their integration into the global market has not only boosted their own economies but also affected the economies of other countries. For instance, the demand for raw materials in China and India has driven up global commodity prices, benefiting commodity-exporting countries. The author states, ...there can be little doubt that, in both India and China, the growth policy during the period was pro-globalization, pro-entry into the global economy" (Fischer page 8)