Could you help give me some examples? What would you do?

Applying This Skill: Conciseness and Clarity Revise the following sentences to improve the conciseness and clarity. 1. One thing that can be said to have greatly improved the presentation was the extra week of rehearsal. 2. The office manager was good at organizing. She also managed the schedule good and helped people with a friendly smile. 3. There are many executives who have not made any progress about the art of writing. 4. There is one supervisor who is of the opinion that this policy will prove destructive to the morale of employees