Course: Business Writing

Revise the following sentences to emphasize the reader's perspective and the "you" view: a. Our safety policy forbids us from renting power equipment to anyone who cannot demonstrate proficiency in its use. b. We take pride in announcing a new schedule of low- cost flights to Halifax. c. So that we may bring our customer records up-to-date and eliminate the expense of duplicate mailings, we are asking you to complete the enclosed card. d. Our fifty years of experience in direct-mail advertising will enable us to help you dazzle your customers. e. I give my permission for you to attend the two-day workshop.