Hello I was wondering if you could help with my exercise 1.1 page 16? Its in the book Workplace Communications The Basics Canadian Edition.

The Keys to Successful Communication Chapter 1 l6 Exercises Exercise 1.1 Revise each of the following three communications to achieve appropriate to the purpose and audience. BeYew Insert Farm at 1001s Actions Help Adobe PDF : AReplyReply to Al From Jane Neal Date: 68/2012 2:00 p.m. Charles Gilliam O: Subject: Vacation You probably don't remember, but I usually take my vacation in July. This year I'm taking the last two weeks of August instead. If you do not approve this you'll create considerable inconvenience for me and you better believe I'l file a grievance