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$10$ What change should be made to sentence $22?$ change Juliana's to Julianas' delete the comma after Abraham change suddenly to sudenly change sayed to said

$11$ What change, if any, should be made to sentence $23?$

$($A$)$ insert an ellipsis after One

change two to Two

change the exclamation point after three to a comma no change is needed

$12$ What change, if any, should be made to sentence $30?$

change screamed to screemed

G change this to This

delete the comma after awesome

no change needs to be made

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