In this assignment you'll put your proofreading & English language skills into practice by revising the following sentences. Here's how to do this assignment: For each sentence below - rewrite it, number the sentence accordingly,according to the principles you've learned in Module Two. Send your revised sentences in a Word document through this link.

Eliminate wordy phrases by substituting a single word wherever possible:

1. Please send me more information pertaining to your new line of bug-killing pesticides.
2. Push in the red button in the event that you see any dark or light smoke rising from the cooking surface.

Eliminate hidden verbs:

1. Although Hugh wanted to offer an explanation of his actions, his boss refused to listen to him talking.
2. Nationwide Call Systems is performing an analysis of our calling patterns to determine how we can save money on long-distance telephone calls.

Reflect a more positive tone or "you" attitude:

1. We cannot repair your car until we get your authorization.
2. We do not sell that product in the extra large size.

Emphasize reader benefits:

1. We need donations so we can expand the free-food program in this community.
2. We have been in the business of repairing sewing machines for more than 40 years.

Make the sentence in the active voice:

1. We should have written replies to all candidates by next week.
2. Grainger Industrial Supply had not yet gotten our order from last week so a new one was sent by our Purchasing Department.

Explain your answer.