To: Department Managers List From: Aaron Alexander Subject: Upcoming Interviews For some time our management team has been thinking about hiring several interns. We decided to offer compensation to the interns in our internship program because in two fields (computer science and information systems) interns are usually paid, which is the norm. However, you may be disappointed to learn that we can offer only three internships In working with our nearby state university, we have narrowed the field to six excellent candidates. These six candidates will be interviewed. This is to inform you that you are invited to attend three interviewing sessions for these student candidates. Your presence is required at these sessions to help us avoid making poor selections Mark your calendars for the following three times. The first meeting is May 3 in the conference room. The second meeting is May 5 in Office 22 (the conference room was scheduled) On May 9 we can finish up in the conference room All of the meetings will start at 2 pm In view of the fact that your protects need fresh ideas and talented new team Go to pg. 209 N AA systems) interns are usually paid, which is the norm. However, you may be disappointed to learn that we can offer only three internships In working with our nearby state university, we have narrowed the field to six excellent candidates. These six candidates will be interviewed. This is to inform you that you are invited to attend three interviewing sessions for these student candidates. Your presence is required at these sessions to help us avoid making poor selections. Mark your calendars for the following three times. The first meeting is May 3 in the conference room. The second meeting is May 5 in Office 22 (the conference room was scheduled). On May 9 we can finish up in the conference room. All of the meetings will start at 2 p.m. In view of the fact that your projects need fresh ideas and talented new team members, I should not have to urge you to attend and be well prepared. Please examine all the candidates' rsums at the company wiki and send me your ranking lists. Aaron Alexander Full contact information) d 35 Instructions: You will find a poorly written email. Correct five faulty sentences. You will find flabby expressions, long lead-ins, fillers, trite business expressions, cliches, buried verbs, lack of plain English, includes repetitious and redundant expressions, excessive exuberance, and other problems. Revise/rewrite only five of the many faulty sentences in the email as follows: (1) Write the faulty sentence; (2) write the corrected (revised) sentence. Also answer the question: Is "My Suggestion" an appropriate Subject for this e-mail? If not, please create a new Subject Submit the typed file with the sentence corrections: save your file using YourLastNameFirstinitat. Activity 6.12