Amend the following email so that the meaning is clearer, and the recipient knows what is expected of them.

Subject: Revisions for Research Report Hi Daniel, Thanks for sending your report last week. I read it over the weekend. I think that the findings need to have a more complete set of figures and analyses. At times, I thought you were being a little too informal as well.

On a different thing, I’ve had to cancel the Tuesday meeting and have rebooked it for Thursday at