16.18 Review all rules in Appendix A about punctuation, number usage, and grammar. Then, rewrite each sentence to make all needed corrections.
A. Please except my application for the Web Developer position (Job ID#4392) on your companies website.
B. For the past 4 years I have helped develop and run several websites.
C. Before I describe some of my technical abilities I want to describe the success of these websites.
D. In my current position at Better Horizons Credit Union the marketing team and several web developers have worked on a web strategy, to attract younger members.
E. I’ve been a significant part of these efforts to match a strategy to a web design, improve the overall aesthetic appeal of the web page and identify strategies to improve our place in internet searches.
F. I was able to oversee some design changes on the Members section of the website G. After applying these design changes the web traffic has grown by 18% in the last month.
H. In each of these web development projects, I’ve gathered input from all people who will use the websites; managers, colleagues, customers and prospects.
I. By getting this input, I can develop websites that are user-friendly, helpful and appealing.
J. I believe my primary strength as a web developer is to understand how the user experience impacts future use, of the website.